Corrections

Text from Jennycon - English

  • Perseverance

  • Learning a completely different language is just a tough job.
    • But, with practice and practice, we can grab/hold a command on it.
    • I don’t know yet how to reach a fluency level on another language but I still try as I only know perseverance is the only key to achieve something whatever we put our mind to.
    • And by only and only through perseverance, we can hold on to any target and achieve it.
    • I feel so hard to express my thoughts in a completely different language as it’s a new thing to do and the mind hasn’t adopted the other language yet.
    • It’s used to the native language.
    • And adoption of some other language is not familiar to the mind but with perseverance it can adopt it.
    • ( It’s my attempt to write a paragraph in another language, I hope it makes sense.) (If there are any mistakes, please correct it.
  • Thanks for your help in advance. )

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English