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  • How I am goint to make money to travel.

  • Firstly I want to let you know that I want to travel to Canada because I want to work there.
  • Nowdays I live in Colombia and my plans are to work in canada and then I would return to Colombia with a good amount of money and buy a bussiness or a house but I have a problem I dont have enough money to buy the ticket and nither a reservation hotel, so I need to make money here in colombia at least two thousand dollars so a continuation my plans to make that money first I am going to get a job where I would get well paid and save for a least the eighty porcent of my salary and also I am going to do desserts to sell on my neighborhood in the nights and the holidays.

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    • Nowdays I live in Colombia and my plans are to work in canada and then I would return to Colombia with a good amount of money and buy a bussiness or a house but I have a problem I dont have enough money to buy the ticket and nither a reservation hotel, so I need to make money here in colombia at least two thousand dollars so a continuation my plans to make that money first I am going to get a job where I would get well paid and save for a least the eighty porcent of my salary and also I am going to do desserts to sell on my neighborhood in the nights and the holidays.
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