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    • Troubles with sea otters population

    • The topic of the lecture is the causes of the decline of the sea otter population.
    • From that premise arise two possible hypotheses.
    • In one of them, the writer points out the importance that could have had the pollution near the sea.
    • The second one is that several otters were hunted by their predators.
    • The most accepted one is the first.
    • A few samples of seawater had been taken near the Alaskan coast and was discovered the existence of some chemicals which could have been crucial for the death of many otters.
    • The death of seals was another clue that led to this hypothesis because pollution not only attacks otters but also other animal species.
    • Only predators scattered in a large area, such as orcas, could achieve the same effect, but these prefer to hunt larger species than otters.
    • One curiosity about the death of otters is that most of them died in a small area near the coast, whereas another stayed alive in the same sea, but in a different zone.
    • That could be explained by a high pollution concentration in the areas where these animals passed off.
    • Rather than the pollution hypothesis, the guy who speaks believes that the otters were hunted by predators.
    • The orcas prefer to hunt whales, but on the Alaskan coast there aren’t any, so they have to hunt otters instead.
    • Besides, orcas have access to the zone where otters stay.

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    • A few samples of seawater had been taken near the Alaskan coast and was discovered the existence of some chemicals which could have been crucial for the death of many otters.
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    • A few samples of seawater had been taken nearat the Alaskan coast and was discoverrevealed the existence of some chemicals which could have been crucialbe the culprit for the deaths of many otters.
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    • A few samples of seawatereawater samples had been taken near the Alaskan coast and was discovered the existence of s. Some chemicals which could have been crucial forin the deaths of many otters have been discovered.
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    • The death of seals was another clue that led to this hypothesis because pollution not only attacks otters but also other animal species.
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    • The death of seals was another clue that led to this hypothesis because pollution not only attacks otters but alsose chemicals are also suspected of killing other animal species. in the area.
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    • The death of seals was another clue that led to this hypothesis because p. Pollution is not only attacksing otters but also other animal species.
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    • Only predators scattered in a large area, such as orcas, could achieve the same effect, but these prefer to hunt larger species than otters.
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    • Only predators that are scattered inover a large area, such as orcas, could achieve the same effect, but these prefer to hunt larger species than otters.
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    • Only predators, such as orcas, scattered in a large area, such as orcas, could achieve the same effect, but thes. However, this type of whale prefers to hunt larger species larger than otters.
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    • One curiosity about the death of otters is that most of them died in a small area near the coast, whereas another stayed alive in the same sea, but in a different zone.
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    • One curiositystrange fact about the death of the otters is that most of them died in a small area near the coast, whereas anothers stayed alive in the same sea, but in a different zone.
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    • One curiosity about the death of otters is that most of them died in a small area near the coast, whereas another stays remained alive in the same sea, but in a different zone.
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    • That could be explained by a high pollution concentration in the areas where these animals passed off.
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    • That cwould be explained by asuggest high pollution concentration in the areas where these animals passed off.died.
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    • Thatis could be explained by a high pollution concentrations in the areas where these animals passed offotters had died from poisoning.
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    • The orcas prefer to hunt whales, but on the Alaskan coast there aren’t any, so they have to hunt otters instead.
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    • The orcas prefer to hunt whales, but on the Alaskan coast there aren’t any. Consequently, so they have to hunt otters instead.
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    • The oOrcas prefer to hunt whales, b. But on the Alaskan coast there aren’t any, so they have present. Therefore they are forced to hunt otters instead.
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