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Text from simsekbekirr - English

 
    • Please correct me if i am wrong about those sentences.

    • In recent decades , so many people from around the world were able to visit Turkey which is my country.
    • It has been argued that if we are sufficiently expose to English , we will speak when it comes to speaking.
    • For some people having a university degree is not really necessary while for others it’s still a key for having a lot of opportunities.
    • Learning programming offers a number of benefits two of which are improving your carrier and having a new hobby.
    • In my opinion one of the main advantages of working abroad is that you meet with foreigners that are from different cultures.
    • Sleeping regularly is the most powerful side of my life style , in this respect sleep is crucial in learning process.
    • Repeating what you studied is rather advantageous for keeping in mind.
    • A further benefit of doing exercise is that our skin seems healthy even more.
    • Some people don’t understand what the native speakers of English said but that problem can be overcome by doing listening practice.
    • Although there are people who claim that Turkish team won’t win EURO 2020 , i believe that the team will win the cup.
    • When it comes to overcoming any fear, the advantages of having strong mental health are substantial.

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    • It has been argued that if we are sufficiently expose to English , we will speak when it comes to speaking.
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    • Another way to put it: It has been argued that if we are sufficiently exposed to Ethe english language, we will speak when it comes to speakingit better.
    • It has been argued that if we are sufficiently exposed to English , we will speak when it comes to speaking.
    • It has been argued that if we are sufficiently exposed to English , we will speak when it comes tobecome better at speaking it.
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    • For some people having a university degree is not really necessary while for others it’s still a key for having a lot of opportunities.
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    • For some people having an university degree is not really necessary while for others it’s still a keyimportant for having a lot of opportunities.
    • For some people, having a university degree is not really necessary, while for others it’s still a key for having a lot of is the key to opportunitiesy.
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    • Learning programming offers a number of benefits two of which are improving your carrier and having a new hobby.
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    • Learning programming offers a number of benefits - two of which are improving your carrieer and having a new hobby.
    • Learning programming offerhas a number of benefits, two of which are improving your carrone's career opportunitiers and having a new hobby.

      NOTE: Personally, I'd delete the second "benefit", i.e., "having a new hobby" ... it's place in this statement is superfluous/unnecessary.
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    • In my opinion one of the main advantages of working abroad is that you meet with foreigners that are from different cultures.
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    • In my opinion, one of the main advantages of working abroad is that you meet with foreignerlocals that arcome from different cultures.
    • In my opinion one of the main advantages of working abroad is that you meet with foreigners that are from differentmeeting foreigners who represent a variety of cultures.
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    • Sleeping regularly is the most powerful side of my life style , in this respect sleep is crucial in learning process.
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    • Sleeping regularly is the most powerful side ofAnother way to put it: Sleeping steadily is one of the best things about my life style , in this respectas sleep is crucial in the learning process.
    • Sleeping regularly is the most powerful sideimportant element of my life style , in this respectbecause regular sleep is crucial infor the learning process.
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    • Some people don’t understand what the native speakers of English said but that problem can be overcome by doing listening practice.
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    • Some people don’t understand what the native speakers of English saidy but that problem can be overcomesolved by doing listening comprehension practice.
    • Some people don’t understand what the native speakers of English saidy but that problem can be overcome by doing listening practice.
    • SWhile some people don’t understand what the native speakers of English said but that problemnative English speakers, this can be overcome by doing listening practice.
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    • Although there are people who claim that Turkish team won’t win EURO 2020 , i believe that the team will win the cup.
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    • Although there are people who claim that the Turkish team won’t win EURO 2020 , iI believe that theis team will win the cup.
    • Although there are peoplthose who claim that Turkish team won’t say Turkey will not win EURO 2020, I believe that Turkey will win the cup.¶

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      Although there are those who say Turkey will not
      win EURO 2020 , iI believe that the teamTurkey will win the cuptitle.
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