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    • The graph shows information about the amount of energy consumption including (petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower) in the USA over a fifty_ year between 1980 and 2030.
    • Overall, what stands out from the data is that the consumption of energy by fuels including (petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear and solar/wind) increased while the consumption of energy by hydropower remained almost constant over the period.
    • Looking at the details, petrol and oil were the most popular among the other fuels both in 1980 and 2030 at about 35q and 47q respectively.
    • If we look at during this 50-year period, coal and natural gas have increased from 16q and 20q in 1980 to 30q and 25q in 2030 respectively.
    • On the other hand, the consumption of nuclear and solar/wind had a slight increase.
    • They were in similar quantities (around 4q units in 1980), and nuclear has risen by 3q and solar/wind by 2q in 2030.
    • In 1980 hydropower was consumed around 4q but it had a slight decline around 3q in 2030.

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    • The graph shows information about the amount of energy consumption including (petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower) in the USA over a fifty_ year between 1980 and 2030.
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    • The graph shows information about the amount of energy consumption, including (petroleum products (e.g., gasoline and oil), coal, natural gas, nuclear, solar/, wind and hydropower)aulic power, that is and will be consumed in the USA over a fifty_ -year betweenperiod, from 1980 andto 2030.
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    • Overall, what stands out from the data is that the consumption of energy by fuels including (petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, nuclear and solar/wind) increased while the consumption of energy by hydropower remained almost constant over the period.
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    • Overall, what stands out from the data is that the consumption of energy by fuels including (petrol and oilThe data presented reveal that over the fifty-year period, the consumption of energy generated by petroleum products, coal, natural gas, nuclear and, solar/wind), and wind sources increased while the consumption of energy by hydropowerhydroelectric energy remained almosbout constant over the same period.
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    • Looking at the details, petrol and oil were the most popular among the other fuels both in 1980 and 2030 at about 35q and 47q respectively.
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    • Looking more closely at the deatails, petrol and oil were the most popular among the other fuels both in 1980 and 2030 at about, we see that from 1980 to 2030 gasoline and oil were the most popular sources of energy, accounting for 35q and 47q, respectively.
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    • If we look at during this 50-year period, coal and natural gas have increased from 16q and 20q in 1980 to 30q and 25q in 2030 respectively.
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    • If we look at during this 50-year period,Over this same fifty-year period the consumption of coal and natural gas have increased, respectively, from 16q and 20q in 1980 to 30q and 25q in 2030 respectively.
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    • They were in similar quantities (around 4q units in 1980), and nuclear has risen by 3q and solar/wind by 2q in 2030.
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    • They were in similar quantities (Nuclear, solar and wind energy sources accounted for around 4q units in 1980), and; by 2030 nuclear has rirosen by 3q and solar/wind by 2q in 2030 and wind energy rose by 2q.
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