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Hello everyone.
- My family consist of 5 members.
- Me, mom, grandmother, grandpa and uncle, Stop, else my cat Barsik.
- Recently I finished nine class in schooland think go to college.
- Learning english times I find bored and don’t learn it.

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- My family consist of 5 members.
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- My family consists of 5 members.
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- My family consist of 5 members.¶
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  Better: There are five people in my family.¶
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  NOTE: When expressing a number in an English sentence, the general rule is to express the single-digits, i.e., 0-9, in the written form: zero, one, two, three, four, five six, seven, eight, and nine. Once you reach the first two-digit number, i.e., "10", it is acceptable to use the number, e.g., 10, 11, 12, etc. instead of spelling out the number.
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- Me, mom, grandmother, grandpa and uncle, Stop, else my cat Barsik.
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- ~~Me,~~This includes mom, grandmother, grandpa ~~and~~, my uncle~~, Stop, e~~ and me. There's alseo my cat, Barsik.
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- Recently I finished nine class in schooland think go to college.
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- Recently, I ~~finished nine class~~completed Grade Nine in school,and think going of going to college.
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- RI recently I finished ~~nine class in schooland think go~~the ninth grade and am thinking about going to college.
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- Learning english times I find bored and don’t learn it.
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- ~~Learning english times I find~~I find English learning periods boreding and don’t I don't learn it.
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- ~~Learning english~~At times I ~~find~~am bored ~~and don’t~~studying English and thus have difficulty learning it.
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