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  • Housing in Britain

    • The bar chart illustrates how the changes that happened to the households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
    • At first glance, we see that the relationship between households in owning and renting accommodation is inverse, in which the percentage of the households owning housing increased from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939 then kept the same level of growth to 1952.
    • Then in 1961 went up to 42%, and continued in development to peak at 69% in 2001.
    • On the contrary, we clearly notice that the growth of renting accommodation in England and Wales was at its highest point in 1918,with 77%.
    • In 1939 decreased to 67%, the from 1939 to 1952 continued at the same level of growth.
    • In 1961 the growth rate went down to 58%, and this decline persisted to 2001, reaching the lowest point with 31%.
    • But in 2001 the contrary has occurred, the owning accommodation was that was escalating fell to 64%.
    • On the other hand, the accommodation renting rose to 36 %.
    • In summary, we notice the growth relation of each of them is inverse.
    • But in 1970 their percentages became equal, which both of them reach 50%.

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    • The bar chart illustrates how the changes that happened to the households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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    • The bar chart illustrates how the changes that happened to the households owning and renting accommodationing trends in housing ownership and rentals in England and Wales from 1918 to 20101.
    • The bar chart illustrates how the changes that happened to the households owningership and rentingal accommodation in England and Wales has changed from 1918 to 20101.
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    • At first glance, we see that the relationship between households in owning and renting accommodation is inverse, in which the percentage of the households owning housing increased from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939 then kept the same level of growth to 1952.
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    • At first glance, we see that the relationship between households in owning and renting accommodation is inverse, in which the percentage of the households owning housing increased from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939 then kept the same level of growth tome ownership and renting is inverse. First, the percentage of home ownership increased from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939, a level at which it remained steady until 1952.
    • At first glance, we see that the relationship between households in owning and renting accommodation is inverse, in whicobserve an inverse trend in the rental and ownership of housing, with the percentage of the householdsose owning housing increaseding from 20% in 1918 to 33% in 1939 then kept the same level of growth tomaintaining the same rate until 1952.
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    • On the contrary, we clearly notice that the growth of renting accommodation in England and Wales was at its highest point in 1918,with 77%.
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    • On the contrary, we clearly notice that the growth of renting accommodationSecond, we can see that home renting in England and Wales was at, in 1918, 77%, its highest point infrom 1918,with 77% to 2011.
    • OIn the contraryst, we clearly notice that the growth of rentingal accommodation in England and Wales was at its highest point in 1918,with 77%77% in 1918 - its highest level during the considered time frame 1918 to 2011.
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    • In 1961 the growth rate went down to 58%, and this decline persisted to 2001, reaching the lowest point with 31%.
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    • In 1961 the growth rate went downrate of home renting decreased to 58%, and this decline persisted to 2001, reaching the lowest point with 31%subsequently decreased to 31% by 2001.
    • In 1961 the growth rate went down to 58%, and thisrental residency fell to 58%, with further declines persisteding up to 2001, reaching thewhen its lowest point with 31%of 31% was reached.
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    • But in 2001 the contrary has occurred, the owning accommodation was that was escalating fell to 64%.
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    • But iIn 2001 the contrary has occurred, the owning accommodation was that was escalating fellrate of home ownership decreased to 64%.
    • But in 2001 the contrary has occurred, the owning accommodation was that was escalatingDuring this year, and in contrast, previously escalating ownership rates fell to 64%.
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    • In summary, we notice the growth relation of each of them is inverse.
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    • InTo summary, we notice the growth relation of each of them is inverseize, the we see an inverse relationship between the rate of home ownership and home renting between 2018 and 2001.
    • In summary, we notice the growth relation of each of them is inverseat rates of rental and owned accommodation for England and Wales form an inverse relationship - given the data from 1918 to 2001.
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