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  • Prefer, adversity and bias in sentences.

  • PREFER Do you PREFER listening to music or reading books?
  • It depends on the time of day.
    • I prefer reading books in foreign languages, therefore, I need to be concentrated.
  • I like listening to music more than reading a book when I’m tired after a day of hard work.
    • Would you PREFER to sleep for longer or to wake up early and do something active this weekend?
    • I would prefer to wake up early to do something active this weekend.
    • It’s a bit private but when I wake up late, I feel like an old horse full of arthritis😂😂😂.
  • ADVERSITY Can you give an example of ADVERSITY from books, movies, or your personal life?
    • Adversity is when your home burns down, you crash your car, break an arm or leg, lose your purse or wallet,...
    • These are soft examples.
    • What should we do when we are facing ADVERSITY?
  • How can we make sure we don’t give up on life?
    • If you are facing adversity, it’s already evidence that you are not giving up on life. Go ahead!
    • Bias Have you ever faced any BIAS in your personal or professional life?
    • I think we always face bias in our life because we live in a society where we interact.
  • It’s impossible not to be judged by other people.
  • My opinion is that we should be authentic, communicate, be open-minded, meet as many people as possible while respecting their personality, traditions, and beliefs.
    • What can we do to overcome BIASES that we have?
    • There are people who totally ignore they have biases.
    • If we ask ourselves how to overcome biases, it’s already a good beginning.
    • It means we know we have and we can struggle with them by communicating, sharing, discussing,...

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