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    • Do you choose love work or has more salary

    • Many people prefer to work in job their love and another people prefer to work in job has a more salary , In this essay I will explain my point of view about this topic .
    • First of all , It is necessary to love our work to be create with it moreover when be create in your work that will attract many people and the salary will be higher .
    • Second of all , when choosing your work for more salary it is not easy to create with it , because will be boring and feeling remorse but may be successful in work if we start love this job and have a patience .
    • In addition,  many companies when do interviews ask the person if he choose the work for  high salary or he love the work , the most company choose employees who like to work .
    • In these days most people prefer work for more salary even they did not love and this is big worng and we must be advised all people to choose their work who loved,  finally , everyone has a different point of view .

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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    • First of all , It is necessary to love our work to be create with it moreover when be create in your work that will attract many people and the salary will be higher .
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    • First of all , It is necessary to love our work to be create with it mive in it. Moreover when be create in your work that will attract many people andyou are productive in your work, people take notice. Then the salary will bebecomes higher .
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    • Second of all , when choosing your work for more salary it is not easy to create with it , because will be boring and feeling remorse but may be successful in work if we start love this job and have a patience .
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    • Second of all , when choosing yourto work for morea greater salary, it is not easy to be create with it ive or productive, because willit would be boring and and you might feeling remorse butfor taking such a job. But you may be successful in work if weyou start loveing this job and have a patience .
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
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    • In addition,  many companies when do interviews ask the person if he choose the work for  high salary or he love the work , the most company choose employees who like to work .
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    • In addition,  many companies when doconducting interviews ask the person if they choose the work for  a high salary or he love the work , the m because it is interesting. Most companyies choose employees who likewant to work in this job.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4
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    • In these days most people prefer work for more salary even they did not love and this is big worng and we must be advised all people to choose their work who loved,  finally , everyone has a different point of view .
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    • In these daysPresently, most people prefer work for more salary even though they did not love and this is big worng and wtheir work. This is a wrong choice! We must be advised all people to choose their work who loved,  finally , everyonich they enjoy. Everyone of course has a different point of view .
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