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    • My favourite film

    • Some guy askme what is my favourite film, and I try to describe it.
    • My favourite film is ’A silent voice’.
    • It’s an interesting and motiving anime film, the story is about the bulling.
    • The story is about 2 students, an old student that try to kill himself and a new student deaf.
    • Since she arrived to the new school, she tried to integrate with the other students, but the students begins to bully to her in particular one guy that passed to bully her to protected her to the others and herself because she tried to kill herself.

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    • Since she arrived to the new school, she tried to integrate with the other students, but the students begins to bully to her in particular one guy that passed to bully her to protected her to the others and herself because she tried to kill herself.
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