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Arrival
The young woman arrived by horse to the city, accompanied by her two guardians.
It was a new place for her.
- Riding by the aqueduct, she looked at the leafy landscape around her in awe.
- The entry into the city also intimidated her, as she was used to her small village.
- She felt like the city engulfed her with such big buildings and diverse people.

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- The young woman arrived by horse to the city, accompanied by her two guardians.
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- It was a new place for her.
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- Riding by the aqueduct, she looked at the leafy landscape around her in awe.
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- Riding by the aqueduct, she looked in awe at the leafy landscape around her ~~in awe~~.
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- The entry into the city also intimidated her, as she was used to her small village.
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- She felt like the city engulfed her with such big buildings and diverse people.
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- She felt like the city engulfed her with such big buildings and diverse people.¶
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  She felt overwhelmed by the city with its large buildings and so many people.
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