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    • Remodelling The Park

    • Grand Park was opened in 1920, a rectangular area with two entrances, the first is from the south side opens on Eldon street, the second is from the north side opens on Arnold Avenue.
    • There was a fountain located in the center of the park.
    • A stage for musicians on the left of the fountain.
    • Seats all around the garden edges with many small rose gardens nearby.
    • Now the garden is changed, which the fountain is replaced with seats all around.
    • All rose gardens around the edges of the park are removed, instead one is on the northeast corner.
  • There is now an amphitheater where the stage for musicians stood.
    • A water feature was built in the place of the glasshouse, and on the opposite of the water feature, there is a change happened, which were built children’s play area where the pond for water plants was, and a cafe nearby where was the rose garden.
    • The access to the park was the same from the previous entrances, but there is a third entrance is built from the underground car park, near the water feature.

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    • Grand Park was opened in 1920, a rectangular area with two entrances, the first is from the south side opens on Eldon street, the second is from the north side opens on Arnold Avenue.
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    • Grand Park was opened in 1920,. It is a rectangular area with two entrances, the first is from the south side, opensing onto Eldon street, and the second is from the north side opensing onto Arnold Avenue.
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    • Now the garden is changed, which the fountain is replaced with seats all around.
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    • Now the garden is changed, which...¶

      NB. I'm not entirely sure what you meant to say here. Do you mean the fountain has been replaced by seats, or that       the fountain ishas been replaced with another fountain, and there are seats all around. it?
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    • A water feature was built in the place of the glasshouse, and on the opposite of the water feature, there is a change happened, which were built children’s play area where the pond for water plants was, and a cafe nearby where was the rose garden.
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    • A water feature was built in the place of the glasshouse, and on the opposite of the water feature, there is a change happened, which were builthave also been changes. A children’'s play area has been built where the pond for water plants was, and a cafe has been built nearby where was the rose garden was.
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    • The access to the park was the same from the previous entrances, but there is a third entrance is built from the underground car park, near the water feature.
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    • The aAccess to the park whas the same from the previous entrancesremained the same, but there is a third entrance is built from the underground car park, near the water feature.
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