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  • Identity theft

    • The threaten of our personal identity has become a big business more than ever before.
    • It can be carried out by some different ways: through the internet, by stealing our credit card or by getting information from documents we throw or leave lying around.
  • For many of us it is hard to stay one step ahead.
  • The aim of this essay is to explain two ways to keep our identity safe.
  • Some people are particularly afraid of new technologies.
  • In such cases they should be made aware of the advantages of using them.
    • One area in which we need to be improved is the distinction between emails sent from safe and suspicious senders.
    • We receive sometimes emails and the information are so tempting that we do not check if the instructions really make sense or if the sender is really safe or known.
    • If we click on a link, for example, it can be very easy to get personal information.
    • Another way in which make life easy is destroying documents.
  • Some people are even of the opinion that everybody should use a shredder in order to be absolutely sure that all the personal information is going to be destroyed.
  • Many people are really afraid about this theft of personal information because of the new technologies and they try to use them as little as possible.
  • In my opinion we should be aware of where and when we live.
    • Maybe a shredder is not more the best solution; our world works always more online and we should not forget it.

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