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  • One day in Jerusalem

    • In 2018 my family and me went on vaccation to Isreal.
  • ”A mysterious and great country”, I thought, and so it was.
    • We visited several cities, but Jerusalem was the one, which was the most interesting for me.
    • It was already dark, when we arrived and our hotel was right on the oil mountains.
    • The view was stunning.
    • I mean, for so many years I heared about this place in school and now I was right up here.
  • I remembered many stories and was excited about the next day.
    • At 7am I woke up and the first thing I did was taking a view over the city from the window.
  • When we started our trip by foot the sun was shining and Jerusalum gleamed in a nice light.
  • It’s a bright city and most of the facades are light-colored.
    • The highlight of this day for me was the Via Dolorosa and the church of the holy sepulchre.
    • In the evening we ate traditional isreali food and visited the souks, which are arabian markets.

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