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My week end
I have passed a nice week end.
I did a ramble at one big parc natural with my boyfriend.
We got up early, and left our house at 5 a.m.
The trip to the parc was during two hours.
When we arrived, we started to walk for two and half hours.
After walking, we arrived in a beautiful lake and we enjoyed our day to swimming. Thanks!

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- My week end
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câu 1
- I have passed a nice week end.
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câu 2
- I did a ramble at one big parc natural with my boyfriend.
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câu 3
- We got up early, and left our house at 5 a.m.
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câu 4
- The trip to the parc was during two hours.
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câu 5
- When we arrived, we started to walk for two and half hours.
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câu 6
- After walking, we arrived in a beautiful lake and we enjoyed our day to swimming. Thanks!
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