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- I have a friend
- My bestfriend is arab.
- In this moment we isn't near because she is in lebanon.
- She is very introvert.
- We not speak of our feeling and I feel sad for it.

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- I have a friend
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- I have a friend¶¶My best friend.
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- My bestfriend is arab.
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- My best friend is aArab.
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- My best friend is aArab.
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- In this moment we isn't near because she is in lebanon.
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- In this moment we isn't near because she is in lebanon.¶¶She lives in Lebanon though, so we don't see each other.
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- ~~In this moment we isn't near because she i~~We aren't near. She lives in lLebanon.
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- She is very introvert.
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- She is vrathery introverted.
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- We not speak of our feeling and I feel sad for it.
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- We not speak of our feeling and I feel sad for it.¶¶It makes me kinda sad that we don't share a lot, as she's very introvert.
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- We nodon't speak ofabout our feeling ~~and I feel sad for it~~. It's very sad.
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