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    • (Can you help for correcting?) Why I Should Learn Music?

    • Music has been an occupation for all human cultures and the civilization. But why?
    • Why all cultures have had an interest to the music?
    • Some biologists and anthropologist have theories about it but it is still an unanswered question.
    • Nevertheless, we can make some estimations about it.
    • Probably they were feeling an unreasonable passion to music.
    • They might feel relief while they were listening to music.
  • When we start to talk about the relation between music and relaxation, we are approaching one of my reasons.
  • I think relaxation has two types.
    • The first one is relaxing after hard physical works, it rests your muscles.
    • The second thing about relaxing is for mentality and mental processes.
    • When you feel so depressed or full, It helps to recovering of your mental injuries and returning back.
  • If I need to give an example, it will be from me.
    • Some days when I studied a lot especially before a stressful exam, I couldn’t find any other good way for relief other than listening or making music.
    • I have a keyboard and if I play it in my resting time, I can be more relax easily.
    • Also, my other reason is the music’s ability to creating socializing opportunities.
  • The music is an international way of expressing emotions and feelings.
  • So, you can share messages even if you don’t know their language (but I recommend to know their languages).
    • But, if I need to tell the truth the most quintessential part about music is being a medicine of the human soul.
  • That’s my main reason.

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