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    • Proposal to help homeless people

    • Introduction The proposal is for a way of getting students involved in helping the homeless in our town.
    • How we would organise it would depend on how many students want to participate and how many money we have.
    • What is the general idea Get students involved in it, would teach them how important is to be prepared for life.
  • This project could be counterproductive unless they understand that they are responsible of it success.
    • Potential volunteers would put themselves forward, depending on what they can offer.
    • How would the project be set up The way it would work is like this: the students would receive each week an amount of money to help the homeless people and they should decide what to do with it.
    • This would be enable that they should know to difference which things are really important and which things not really.
    • And they would understand that usually homelessness ins only one of the problem the person could have.
    • Why would the project be worthwhile One good idea would be to make a balance of the complete project at the end.
    • It would teach the students how important they actions can be and even more important, how able they are to help another people and get results.
  • The project is clearly worthwhile, as it would be of considerable benefit to the homeless.

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