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    • 　A resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in the Christian world.
    • It’s a beautiful building, full of morose tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choirboys clear their throats.
    • The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.

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    • It’s a beautiful building, full of morose tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choirboys clear their throats.
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    • It’s a beautiful building, full of morose tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choirboys clears their throats.

      > Got rid of the word "morose" -- it's weird in this context; also chopped "boys" from "choirboys" -- it is arcane. You could leave it, but I recommend you do not.
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    • The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.
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    • The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabiliahistorical surroundings.
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    • The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greateeven the most egotist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.ical people. ¶

      PS: Lose the subordinate clause in its entirety -- it's senseless and adds nothing of value to your statwment, @ least not in this context.
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