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- 　A resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in the Christian world.
- It’s a beautiful building, full of morose tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choirboys clear their throats.
- The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.

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  > There were two grammatical errors in your opening statement. I fixed them ... take a look.
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- 　A resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in the Christian world.
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- 　AThe resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in the Christian world.¶
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  > One error: Need to use the definite article "the", not "a", in this instance.
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- 　AThe resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in all of the Christian world.
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- 　A resting place of the royals, Westminster Abbey, is one of the most visited churches in the Christian world.
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- It’s a beautiful building, full of morose tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choirboys clear their throats.
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- It’s a beautiful building, full of ~~morose~~ tombs and monuments, with an acoustic field that will send shivers down your spine when the choir~~boys~~ clears their throats.¶
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  > Got rid of the word "morose" -- it's weird in this context; also chopped "boys" from "choirboys" -- it is arcane. You could leave it, but I recommend you do not.
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- The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.
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- The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble the greatest egoist, despite the weighty and ornate ~~memorabilia~~historical surroundings.
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- The roll call of the dead and honored is guaranteed to humble ~~the greate~~even the most egotist~~, despite the weighty and ornate memorabilia.~~ical people. ¶
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  PS: Lose the subordinate clause in its entirety -- it's senseless and adds nothing of value to your statwment, @ least not in this context.
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