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    • The three most important personal factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be my age, career choice and my health.
    • Now I’m 23 which means that I’m just at the beginning of accumulating my assents and I’m not getting paid much.
    • My career choice is most likely to influence my income as well as the duration of my career, health and employment risks associated with this.
    • After all, my health luckily doesn’t take too much to spend on it at the present time.
    • The three most important economic factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be currency value, business cycles and customer prices.
    • I get paid in Russian rubles which is quite an unstable currency due to the Russian economy often depends on oil prices and international economic relations with the USA and the EU.
    • This means that my plans for abroad adventures ( once whey would be possible ) mostly depend on the value of the ruble against the dollar and euro.
    • I’m currently working in a B2B sector which means when the economy is in its contraction phase my salary is ”in danger”.
    • Since businesses tend to reduce their expenses during that period they could refuse the services the company I work for provides.
    • This means my return on investment of my labor decreasing and I rather have to work more to get the same amount of money or simply get paid less.
    • And the last, customer prices are an obvious factor that affects my financial planning decisions.
    • When prices for goods are rising because of inflation and my purchasing power declining then I have cut back on spendings or save less than I did before.
    • This, in turn, postpones the day of achievement of my mid-term and long term plans

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  • Frazo 1
    • The three most important personal factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be my age, career choice and my health.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The three most important personal factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be my age, career choice, and my health.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • Now I’m 23 which means that I’m just at the beginning of accumulating my assents and I’m not getting paid much.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Now I’m 23 which myeanrs that I’m just at the beginning ofold. I recently began accumulating my assents and I’m not getting paid much.. My current salary is low.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • My career choice is most likely to influence my income as well as the duration of my career, health and employment risks associated with this.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My career choice is most likely to influencecorrelate with my income as well as the duration of my career, health, and employmentthe risks associated with ithis.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My career choice is most likely to influence my income as well as the duration of my career, healthmy health and the duration and employment risks associated with thisof my career.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • The three most important economic factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be currency value, business cycles and customer prices.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The three most important economic factors that affect my financial planning decisions are going to be currency value, ¶
      business cycles and customer      currency exchange rates,¶
      business patterns, and market       prices.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • I get paid in Russian rubles which is quite an unstable currency due to the Russian economy often depends on oil prices and international economic relations with the USA and the EU.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I get paid inThe currency of my salary is the Russian rubles, which is quite an unstable currency due to the Russian economy often’s dependsency on oil prices and international economic relations with the USA and the EU.
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    • I get paid in Russian rubles which is, a quite an unstable currency due to the Russian economy often dependsing on oil prices and international economic relations with the USAbetween Russia and tThe EUWest.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • This means that my plans for abroad adventures ( once whey would be possible ) mostly depend on the value of the ruble against the dollar and euro.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This means that my plans for abroad adventures ( once whey would be possible ) mosConsequently, the prospects for my overseas adventures greatly depend on the value of the ruble against the dollar and the euro.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments 1
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    • This means that my plans for abroad adventures abroad ( once when they would be again possible ) mostly depend on the value of the ruble against the dollar and euro.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • I’m currently working in a B2B sector which means when the economy is in its contraction phase my salary is ”in danger”.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I’m currently working in a B2B sector, which means that when the economy is in its contraction phaseng my salary is ”in danger”. of being reduced.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I’m currently working in a B2B sector which means, meaning that when the economy is in its contraction phase, my salary is ”in danger” of being cut.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Since businesses tend to reduce their expenses during that period they could refuse the services the company I work for provides.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Since businesses tend to reduce their expenses during thatsuch a period they couldan refuse the services the company I work for proo provide servidces.
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    • Since businesses tend to reduce their expenses during thatsuch periods, they could refuse the services that the company I work for provides.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • This means my return on investment of my labor decreasing and I rather have to work more to get the same amount of money or simply get paid less.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This means my return on investmentthat the fruits of my labor are decreasing and I ratherwould have to work more to get the same amount of money or simply get paidearn less.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This means mythat the return on investment of my labor is decreasing and I ratherwould have to work more to getrather more for the same amount of money or simply get paid less.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • When prices for goods are rising because of inflation and my purchasing power declining then I have cut back on spendings or save less than I did before.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • When prices for goods are rising because of inflation and, my purchasing power declining then I have cut back on spendinges. As a result, I have reduce my expenses or save less than I did before.
      Alexqc1990Alexqc1990 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • When prices for goods are rising because of inflation and my purchasing power is declining then. So, I have to cut back on spendings or save less than I did before.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13