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Văn bản từ faaaaatemeh - English

  • I can describe my feelings...

    • In my opinion, feelings are every thing.
    • We can communicate through feelings with out using a word.
  • Emotions are common between humans and other creatures; it is a global language.
    • I had an adventurous life ; I experience many feelings: I was thrilled when I passed the university entrance exam , my parents were absolutely astonished.
    • I was absolutely furious when I lost much money in the stock market and I promised my self to don’t risk on my money anytime.
    • I was very miserable when my uncle passed away ; he was a sympathetic and supportive man. this can be a terrifying experience, people may leave you suddenly and you would stay alone with a broken heart and unspoken words; so I advise you to show your feelings and be more emothional.
    • Say your parents or other lovely people in your life how proud you are of them; Hurry up ; we don’t have enough time!!!

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    • I had an adventurous life ; I experience many feelings: I was thrilled when I passed the university entrance exam , my parents were absolutely astonished.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I've had an adventurous life ; I experienced many feelings: I was thrilled when I passed the university entranceadmission exam , my parents were absolutely astonished.
      MarianoBadanoMarianoBadano profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I was absolutely furious when I lost much money in the stock market and I promised my self to don’t risk on my money anytime.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was absolutely furious when I lost too much money in the stock market and I promised my self to don’t risk onnot to risk / gamble with my money anytimegain.
      MarianoBadanoMarianoBadano profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I was very miserable when my uncle passed away ; he was a sympathetic and supportive man. this can be a terrifying experience, people may leave you suddenly and you would stay alone with a broken heart and unspoken words; so I advise you to show your feelings and be more emothional.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was very miserable when my uncle passed away ; he was a sympathetic and supportive man. Deathis can be a terrifying experience, people may leave you all of a suddenly and you would stayare left alone with a broken heart and unspoken words; so I advise you to show your feelings and be more emothional.
      MarianoBadanoMarianoBadano profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Say your parents or other lovely people in your life how proud you are of them; Hurry up ; we don’t have enough time!!!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Say to your parents or other lovely peopled ones in your life how proud you are of them; Hurry up ; we don’t have enough time!!!
      MarianoBadanoMarianoBadano profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7