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In regards to the recent discussion about the facilities, I would like to write an essay devoted to the current situation of our region.

On the one hand, we must stimulate our brain and a wide range of enlightening and entertaining activities, which a history museum can offer, is a decent way to do it.

Nobody will deny that knowledge of homeland history is an essential part of the educational process.

Moreover, we can enrich the school program and even bring together adults by offering various thematic activities such as lectures, reading clubs, chess tournaments, etc. On the other hand, it’s crucial to build up our physical condition.

In a recent survey, 60% of our residents said the local population is clinically obese.

This shocking statistic is the vital point that we need to take into consideration while making the decision.

It’s believed that there are lots of possibilities to do exercises and a sports center isn’t the best and the only place.

But where should people practice sports, if the climate of our region allows them to do it outside only for half of a year?

Not only are sports centers more comfortable but also offer professional help to solve weight issues.

Nevertheless, the high priority is the health of the population and, based on the statistic data and the weather conditions, I would suggest considering the sports center as the facility that is needed the most.