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  • About Me

    • Hi, I´m Vitor Verly A few months ago I had to move from São Luis to Barcarena, because I choosed to work in another Company.
    • Until this moment My family are familiarizing with the new place.
    • My childrens, Helena 7 years old and Madalena 2 years old are liking a lot, They are going at the beach to see the sunset every days.
  • This is my new life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English