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  • About Me

    • Hi, I´m Vitor Verly A few months ago I had to move from São Luis to Barcarena, because I choosed to work in another Company.
    • Until this moment My family are familiarizing with the new place.
    • My childrens, Helena 7 years old and Madalena 2 years old are liking a lot, They are going at the beach to see the sunset every days.
  • This is my new life.

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    • Hi, I´m Vitor Verly A few months ago I had to move from São Luis to Barcarena, because I choosed to work in another Company.
      투표하세요!
    • Hi, I´m Vitor Verly.
      A few months ago I had to move from São Luis to Barcarena      , because I choosed to work infor another Company.
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    • Hi, I´m Vitor Verly
      . A few months ago, I had to move from São Luis to Barcarena, because I choosed to work infor another Ccompany.
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      투표하세요!
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    • My childrens, Helena 7 years old and Madalena 2 years old are liking a lot, They are going at the beach to see the sunset every days.
      투표하세요!
    • My childrens, Helena who's 7 years old and Madalena who's 2 years old, are liking a lot,. They are going ato the beach to see the sunset every days.
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    • My childrens, Helena who is 7 years old and Madalena who is 2 years old are liking a lot, They are going atlike it a lot. Every day they go to the beach to seewatch the sunset every days.
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