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Can you say it like this?
- in order to set up your own business you are going to have to have good connections

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- in order to set up your own business you are going to have to have good connections
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- iIn order to set up your own business you ~~are going to~~will have to have good connections.
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- iIn order to set up your own business you ~~are going~~have to have / musto have good connections.
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- ~~in order to set up your own business you are going to have to have good~~You'll need solid connections to establish a business. ¶
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- in order to s~~et up~~tart your own business you ~~are going to have~~need to have good connections
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