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    • The author Ian McEwan knows how to write novels as he has proven with his published books Saturday as well as Atonement (even though the first of both books failed in his amazon reviews).
    • Another proof of his talent the author states with his novel Amsterdam, whose plot provides a variety of surprising turns and more importantly encourages its readers to question ethical matters of high importance like responsibility, friendship, and its boundaries as well as the subject of coincidence.
    • By illustrating in which possible way different factors influence the transmission of messages and how a sentence can be interpreted in a completely different context, for instance, the author skilfully plays with the role of time and timing.
    • Nevertheless, Ian McEwan’s novel Amsterdam contains shortcomings, which heavily determine the novel’s overall review.
    • Despite its brevity, its lack of intelligibility for those reading, not to mention the conception of the two final parts, will certainly lead to a lot of head-shaking, as also experienced by the critic.
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    • The author Ian McEwan knows how to write novels as he has proven with his published books Saturday as well as Atonement (even though the first of both books failed in his amazon reviews).
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    • The author, Ian McEwan, knows how to write novels as he has proven with his published books “Saturday” as well as “Atonement” (even though the first of both books failed in his aAmazon reviews).
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    • Another proof of his talent the author states with his novel Amsterdam, whose plot provides a variety of surprising turns and more importantly encourages its readers to question ethical matters of high importance like responsibility, friendship, and its boundaries as well as the subject of coincidence.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Another proof of his talent on how the author statewrites, is with his novel “Amsterdam”, whose plot provides a variety of surprising turns and more importantly encourages its readers to question ethical matters of high importance like responsibility, friendship, and its boundaries as well as the subject of coincidence.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
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    • By illustrating in which possible way different factors influence the transmission of messages and how a sentence can be interpreted in a completely different context, for instance, the author skilfully plays with the role of time and timing.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • By illustrating in which possible way different factors influence the transmission of messages and how a sentence can be interpreted in a completely different context, for instance, the author skillfully plays with the role of time and timing.
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      赶紧投票吧！
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    • Despite its brevity, its lack of intelligibility for those reading, not to mention the conception of the two final parts, will certainly lead to a lot of head-shaking, as also experienced by the critic.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • Despite its brevity, its lack of intelligibility for those reading, and not to mention the conception of the two final parts, will certainly lead to a lot of head-shaking, as also experienced by the critics.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture 评论
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
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