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    • Secret Ambition

  • If we look back at famous writers, we’ll see a lot of talented people.
  • We grew up with their books and we love them.
  • But what if we think about others writes who couldn’t become famous and we don’t know them.
  • What do you think about them?
  • What did they lack?
  • Well, it could be a lot of reasons of that, but I think a true writer should possess certain features.
  • If you want to became a professional writer and fulfill your secret ambition, I reckon, you need to read a lot.
  • Reading is really important.
  • If you read various literature, you learn a lot, there’s every likelihood that you’ll be able to teach something useful your future readers.
  • Reading helps you to find your own style.
  • To re-read is also important despite you might think that you’ve already know a lot.
  • Some things being re-read could appear in a totally new light.
  • Being a writer requires imagination.
  • It can be the formidable challenge of developing your own style.
  • From my perspective, I think a writer should be original among others.
  • So, you shouldn’t just copy the work of the great writes.
  • You need to produce your own material.
  • And another thing you should know - you will need to have enough time to devote it to producing good quality stories or novels.
  • So, be ready to know that you will need to sacrifice your social life to spend a lot of time sitting at your desk and trying to write.
  • To conclude, I would say that to become a writer can almost everybody, because this is inside of us.
  • Being patient, with you imagination, knowledges and the help of our experts you will achieve a great success and don’t be shocked if it will be an overnight success.

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    • Secret Ambition Olya, the ’essay’ in its original form is very good, but I have taken the liberty to make a few modifications to the essay, presented in its entirety in this ”BOX”. Note that while I have preserved your original title, it does not strike me as being particularly well aligned with the content of the essay. (I modified the title slightly w/ the addition of the indefinite article, for obvious the reason). Here goes:¶

      A Secret Ambition¶

      If we look back at famous writers, we’ll see a lot of talented people whose books we grew up with and loved. ¶
      But what about writers whose work has not become famous and we don’t know them? What do you think about them? What did they lack?¶

      Well, while there could be many explanations, I think that a true writer should possess at least the following three characteristics.¶

      First: If you want to became a professional writer and fulfill your secret ambition, you need to read a lot. Reading is really important. If you read a variety of literature, you will learn a lot about writing, and thus might glean something useful that you can impart to your future readers. In essence, reading can help you to find your own style. It is also important to read certain material more than once even if you think you already “know” the essence of a work. Why? Because certain concepts and ideas take on a completely new and/or different meaning upon a second, third, etc. reading.¶

      Second: Successful writing requires imagination, and it can be the formidable challenge of developing your own style. I think that to be successful, a writer must, above all else, be original and find her/his own voice. It is not enough to simple imitate the work or style of established and/or successful writers. You need to produce your own material in your own “voice”.¶

      Third: It is of paramount importance to devote sufficient time to the task of producing high-quality stories or novels. So be prepared to sacrifice your free time and “social life” by sitting at your desk and concentrating on your writing.¶

      To conclude, I think that (almost) anyone has the potential to become a writer because we all have “stories” within us. So remember to exercise patience, apply your imagination and knowledge, and with the help of our experts, you could become a successful writer … but don’t be shocked if success does not come overnight.¶





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