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  • Reasons for study according to the age of student

    • The graph shows the difference between the reason for study according to the age of the students.
    • It can be seen from the graph that as older is the student, the study for interest become more important than the study for career.
    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based in their careers, and only 10% of these students do the same for their own interests.
    • In the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
    • Notice that, for all age ranges, the total percentual is less than 100%.
    • It means that there are other reasons for people to study.

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    • It can be seen from the graph that as older is the student, the study for interest become more important than the study for career.
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    • It can be seen from the graph that asthe older is the student is, the study for interest becomes more important than the study for career.
    • It can be seen from the graph that asthe older is the student, the is, studying for interest becomes more important than the studying for career reasons.
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    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based in their careers, and only 10% of these students do the same for their own interests.
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    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based ion their careers, and only 10% of these students do the samestudy for their own interests.
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    • In the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
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    • IOn the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
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    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
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    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
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