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Văn bản từ flavio_mat - English

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  • Hello, there!
    • first and foremost, I want to tell you that I am a lover of multimedia applied in any field.
    • Since the first time I watched my first anime, played a video game and watched the great film productions, I fell in love with this wonderful world, wishing from my youth to be able to belong, one day, to this industry.
  • For me, multimedia is a door that allows us to enter a wonderful magical world that gives us the opportunity to be the protagonists of great stories.
  • I wish one day that I could be the person who creates these worlds and that others can enjoy them.
  • Currently, I have not had any work experience in this area.
  • My work experience is summarized in being a functionalities developer of a document management system created in PHP.
  • However, despite the fact that my current job is not rooted in this industry, I have been able to put into practice the fundamentals of design that I have learned throughout my university career.
  • I have received positive reviews from clients arguing the visual improvement and ease of use of my designs.
  • I dedicate my free time to improving my skills.
  • I like to enjoy great film productions, especially oriental cinema.
  • I always try to analyze the factors that make a film production stand out from others.
  • In addition, I also spend part of my time playing video games.
  • I like open world video games like The Legend of Zelda and Grand Theft Auto V.

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    • Since the first time I watched my first anime, played a video game and watched the great film productions, I fell in love with this wonderful world, wishing from my youth to be able to belong, one day, to this industry.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Since the first time I watched my first anime, played a video game and watched thea great film productions, I fell in love with this wonderful world, wishing, from mya youthng age, to be able to belong, one day,one day belong to this industry.
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    • For me, multimedia is a door that allows us to enter a wonderful magical world that gives us the opportunity to be the protagonists of great stories.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • My work experience is summarized in being a functionalities developer of a document management system created in PHP.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • However, despite the fact that my current job is not rooted in this industry, I have been able to put into practice the fundamentals of design that I have learned throughout my university career.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I have received positive reviews from clients arguing the visual improvement and ease of use of my designs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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