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Hi !
Hi !
My name is Danila , I'm Italian.
- I want to learn better English and Spanish.
- Also I want to learn Portoguese but I know almost nothing about this language.
Help me , please! :D

Dany_happyAugust 2013Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hi !
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi !
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- My name is Danila , I'm Italian.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I want to learn better English and Spanish.
  Undi sekarang!
- I want to ~~learn better~~improve my English and Spanish.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- Also I want to learn Portoguese but I know almost nothing about this language.
  Undi sekarang!
- AI also I want to learn Portouguese but I know almost nothing about thisat language.
  AldinKovacevic Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- Help me , please! :D
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5