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    • Do you think teenagers today have it ”too easy”?

    • No, I don’t think they have it too easy.
    • Nowadays, teenagers spend lots of time in front of their mobile or computer, among other things, chatting with virtual friends.
    • I was a teenager in the ’90s, harassment, school dropout, drug issues, suicides were happening but currently, it’s getting more and more frequent.
    • These phenomena are very worrying.
    • Teenagers should have someone with whom speaking when their life is getting too complicated.

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    • Nowadays, teenagers spend lots of time in front of their mobile or computer, among other things, chatting with virtual friends.
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    • NowaThese days, teenagers spend lots of time in front ofon their mobile phones and/or computer, among other things, chatting with virtual friends.
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    • I was a teenager in the ’90s, harassment, school dropout, drug issues, suicides were happening but currently, it’s getting more and more frequent.
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    • I was a teenager in the ’90s, h. Harassment, school dropout, drug issues, suicides were happening bat that time. But currently, it’s getting more and more frequent.
    • I was a teenager in the ’90s, h. Harassment, school dropouts, drug issues, and suicides were happening, but currently, it's getting more and more frequent.
    • When I was a teenager in the ’90s, harassment, school dropout, drug issues, suicides were happening but currently, it’s getting more and such issues as harassment (bullying), dropping out of school, drug abuse, and suicide existed but it seems now to be happening more frequently.
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    • Teenagers should have someone with whom speaking when their life is getting too complicated.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Teenagers should have someone with whom they can speaking when their life is getting too complicated.
    • Teenagers should haveneed someone withto whom speakingthey can talk and seek counsel when their life is gettingves become too complicated.
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