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    • Education during pandemy

    • Nowadays most of the countries in the world are suffering from Coronavirus pandemic.
    • Almost all of the sectors have been negatively affected by this epidemic, and education sector is one of them.
    • Most of the schools have changed their education system to online education to prevent the spread of the virus.
    • However, according to many students, as well as educators, online education is not as efficient as face to face education.
    • There are several reasons why face to face education is better than online education, but two stand out: lack of social interaction and absence of facilities.
    • One reason why students and teachers are in favor of face to face education is lack of social interaction in online learning.
    • / Lack of social interaction is what makes online education insufficient compared to formal education.
    • Students cannot benefit from online education as much as they could in face to face education.
    • They lose motivation when they cannot be in physical interaction with their class mates.
    • Likewise, they don’t have the chance to communicate with their teachers face to face.
    • Not only students, but also teachers, have difficulties in online education.
    • For most of the students keep their cameras off, teachers don’t have the chance to see the expressions on their face.
    • As a result, they cannot take enough feedback from their students.
    • Besides, not being able to know who they address to causes lack of motivation also for teachers.

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    • Almost all of the sectors have been negatively affected by this epidemic, and education sector is one of them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Almost all of the sectorsaspects of life have been negatively affected by this epidemic, and the education sector is one of them.
    • Almost all of the sectors have been negatively affected by this epidemic, and education sector is one of themNearly all spheres of life, including education, have been ill-affected by this experience.
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    • Most of the schools have changed their education system to online education to prevent the spread of the virus.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Most of the schools have changed their education system to online education to prevent the spread of the virus.
    • Most of the schools have changed their education systemeducational programs have migrated to online mode of education to preventin order to help stem the spread of the virus.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • However, according to many students, as well as educators, online education is not as efficient as face to face education.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, according to many students, as well as educators, online education is not as efficient as face to face education.
    • However, according to many students, as well asnd educators, online education is not as efficient as face to faceective as in-person education.
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    • There are several reasons why face to face education is better than online education, but two stand out: lack of social interaction and absence of facilities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • TWhile there are several reasons why in-person, i.e., face -to -face, education is bettermore effective than online education, but two stand out: l(1) Lack of social interaction and absence of(2) Insufficient access to facilities.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • One reason why students and teachers are in favor of face to face education is lack of social interaction in online learning.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One reason why students and teachers are in favor of face to face education is the lack of social interaction during online learning.
    • One reason whMany students and teachers are in favor of face to face education is lack of social interaction in online learningin-person education because it allows for the social interaction that the online mode of education lacks.
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    • / Lack of social interaction is what makes online education insufficient compared to formal education.
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    • / LA lack of social interaction is what makes online education insufficienteffective compared to formal education physically together at the same location.
    • / Lack of social interaction is what makerenders online education insufficient compared to formalless effective than the in-person mode of education.
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    • For most of the students keep their cameras off, teachers don’t have the chance to see the expressions on their face.
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    • For most of theUnfortunately, most students keep their cameras off, and teachers don’t have the chance to see the expressions on their faces.
    • For most of tWhen students keepdeactivate their cameras off, teachers don’t have then their computers, etc., their teachers chance tonot see their facial expressions on their facduring a course lecture.
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    • Besides, not being able to know who they address to causes lack of motivation also for teachers.
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    • Besides, not being able to know who they address talso causes a lack of motivation also for teachers.
    • Besides, not being able to know who they address to causes lack of motivation also for teacherIn addition, they are unable to know which of their students might benefit from additional attention and thus the teachers become less motivated in their efforts.
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