Korreksies

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    • Q1) Would you do anything differently if you could go back to the past? Why?
  • A1) If I could rewind time and go back to the past, I would not give up studying mathematics.
    • I gave up my mathematics when I was in second grade in middle school.
  • At the end of the 2nd semester, my homeroom teacher who taught us Mathematics told me that if I have any difficulties in mathematics, don’t hesitate to ask her and she will help me with it.
    • But at that time, I was very sick and tired of Mathematics and gave up.
  • Since I gave up, my grades in mathematics were always bad during middle and high school period.
    • If I had not given up and studied harder, I could have scored high on SAT and entered a better college.
  • Q2) What would be the butterfly effect of your answer for Q1?
    • A2) If I had not given up studying mathematics, I would have gotten a better score on SAT and entered a better college.
    • I earned a bachelor’s degree in Arts because I am bad with numbers but if I had pushed myself to continue studying mathematics and studied harder, I would have gotten a bachelor of science degree in college I guess.
    • It would definitely have led me to have more opportunities to have different kinds of jobs in many fields.

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