Korjaukset

Text from 55elena_jv - English

  • The little one

  • I have a hedgehog.
    • But just a couple of days ago I had whole two hedgehogs.
    • The big one lives with me for about couple of years, the small one is his son.
    • This summer we brought a girl to my hedgehog and three months later I got the little one (It was the price).
    • Although the idea was to sell the little one, when I really did it, I become feel sadness.
    • The little one lived with us about two weeks, made noise at night, was very active, almost didn’t sit on hands, althoug wasn’t afraid at all.
    • Actually hedgehogs didn’t get along, the big one flirted like with a girl, and the small one was dread.
    • Also he needed more space and his own running wheel.
    • I gave him to a good hands I think, but the feel of sadness still with me.
    • So I won’t breed hedgehogs any more, It’s too much for me.

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