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    • The Bauhaus is a deutsh school, founded in 1919, next the First war and close by nazy’s government in 1933.
    • This is first a school, today it’s also considered as an art movement and a style.
    • This school was founded by Walter Gropius, a deutsh architect and ingenieur.
    • He work before in the Deutsh Werkbund, an association searching a new art beetwen classical art and industriel.
    • GRopius met Muthesius and worked for Berhens.
    • He discover with them the beggining of industrial design.
    • In the Bauhaus school, he continue in this road : he formed students to differents ways : classicals arts as peinture or sculpture but also more manufacture as cast art or tapestry...
    • When the new deutsh government decide to cut the helps of the school, The bauhaus move to Dessau where a new edifice was build following principles of Bauhaus : useful, simply and use of concrete and steel.
    • Next this, a new class open : architecture.
    • In 1933, the school close.
    • Many professors and student continues their carreer in USA.

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    • The Bauhaus is a deutsh school, founded in 1919, next the First war and close by nazy’s government in 1933.
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    • The Bauhaus is a deDutsch school, founded in 1919, nextar the Ffirst war and close by nWorld War and not far from Nazyi’s government in 1933.
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    • The Bauhaus is a deutshGerman school of architecture, founded in 1919, nextsoon after the the First wWorld War, and closed by nazy’sthe Nazi government in 1933.
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    • This is first a school, today it’s also considered as an art movement and a style.
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    • This is first was a school, but today it’'s also considered as an art movement and a style.
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    • This is first a school,At first, it was considered to be a school of architecture and design, but today it’ is also considered asto be an art movement and a style.
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    • He work before in the Deutsh Werkbund, an association searching a new art beetwen classical art and industriel.
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    • He worked before in the Deutsh Werkbund, an association searching a new art beetween classical art and industrieal.
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    • He work beforehad worked previously in the Deutsh Werkbund, an association searching for a new art bestyle of art somewhere between classical art and industrieal.
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    • In the Bauhaus school, he continue in this road : he formed students to differents ways : classicals arts as peinture or sculpture but also more manufacture as cast art or tapestry...
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    • In the Bauhaus school, he continue id going down this road : --he formed students tin two differents ways categories: classicals arts as a peainturer or sculpture but, and also more in manufactureing as cast art or tapestry...
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    • In the Bauhaus school, he continue ind along this road : he form. He influenced and developed students toin differents ways : in the classicals arts such as as peaintureing or sculpture but also more manufacture as cast artcrucially in manufacturing arts such as casting or tapestry...
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    • When the new deutsh government decide to cut the helps of the school, The bauhaus move to Dessau where a new edifice was build following principles of Bauhaus : useful, simply and use of concrete and steel.
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    • When the new deDutsch government decided to cut the helps ofaiding the school, Tthe bBauhaus moved to Dessau where a new edifice was buildt following principles of Bauhaus : useful, simplye and usage of concrete and steel.
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    • When thea new deutshGerman government decided to cut the helps offunding to the school, The bBauhaus moved to Dessau where a new edifice was builbuilding was constructed following principles of Bauhaus : useful, simply and the use of concrete and steel.
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