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    • Today i’m going to talk about my life.
    • I’m from Brazil and i’m 16 years old, and i study engineering (actually it is building technician) I want to be fluent in English, because i think it is a cool, useful and a simple language, and me and my dad are planning a trip to the U.S. to about 2022 I love listen to Quenn/Freddy Mercury, classic rock, Modern Talking, eletronic and some more.
    • I live with my mom and my aunt since my grandfather died, we’re all good, my mom work in a clothing store and my aunt is retired, and i just study, i worked in a supermarket a few months ago, but i was fired (unfortunately) My dad, he lives in Curitiba, about 200Km from where i live, i was with him a few weeks ago, when it’s possible, i go to there to visit and maybe walk arround the city.
    • My dream job is become a pilot, almost getting paid to look through a window, but i have a few ideas to work on, like a police officer, a lawyer or an engineer.
    • The ”TH” pronounce that was hard for me learn, my english teacher said that is like the ”F” sound in portuguese, and i was saying ”Fhat, Fhe, Fhrough”, that was weird, but now i know ho to say it (kinda) correctly.
    • And for today it’s all, if you’re correcting this text, thank you so much. Bye

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    • I’m from Brazil and i’m 16 years old, and i study engineering (actually it is building technician) I want to be fluent in English, because i think it is a cool, useful and a simple language, and me and my dad are planning a trip to the U.S. to about 2022 I love listen to Quenn/Freddy Mercury, classic rock, Modern Talking, eletronic and some more.
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    • I’'m from Brazil and i’I'm 16 years old, and i. I study engineering (but actually it is building technician).
      I want to be fluent in English, because       iI think it is a cool, useful and a simple language, and me and my dad. My dad and I are planning a trip to the U.S. to aboutaround 2022.
      I love listen      ing to Quenen/Freddy Mercury, classic rock, Mmodern Ttalking, electronic and some more.
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    • I’m from Brazil and. i’m 16 years old, and i studying engineering (actually it i's building technicianology)¶
      I want to be fluent in English, because i think it is a cool, useful and       a simple language, and me and my dad. My dad and I are planning a trip to the U.S. tosometime about 2022.
      I love listen      ing to Quenn/Freddy Mercury, classic rock, Modern Talking, eletronic and some moreothers.
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      Сада гласајте !
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    • I live with my mom and my aunt since my grandfather died, we’re all good, my mom work in a clothing store and my aunt is retired, and i just study, i worked in a supermarket a few months ago, but i was fired (unfortunately) My dad, he lives in Curitiba, about 200Km from where i live, i was with him a few weeks ago, when it’s possible, i go to there to visit and maybe walk arround the city.
      Сада гласајте !
    • I live with my mom and my aunt since my grandfather died, we’. We're all doing good, m. My mom works in a clothing store and my aunt is retired, and i just study, i. I attend college and used to worked in a supermarket a few months ago, but iI was fired (unfortunately).
      My dad      , he lives in Curitiba, about 200Kkm from where iI live, i. I was with him a few weeks ago, w. When it’'s possible, iI go to there to visit and maybe walk arround the city.
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    • I've lived with my mom and my aunt since my grandfather died, w. We’re all good, m. My mom works in a clothing store and my aunt is retired, and i. I just study, i. I worked in a supermarket a few months ago, but iI was fired (unfortunately).
      My dad, he lives in Curitiba, about 200Km from where       iI live, i was with. I saw him a few weeks ago, w. When it’'s possible, i go to there to visit and maybe even walk arround the city.
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    • My dream job is become a pilot, almost getting paid to look through a window, but i have a few ideas to work on, like a police officer, a lawyer or an engineer.
      Сада гласајте !
    • My dream job is to become a pilot,. It's like almost getting paid to look through a window, but iI have a few other ideas to work on, like being a police officer, a lawyer or an engineer.
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    • My dream job is become a pilot,. It would be almost like getting paid to look through a window, b. But iI have a few ideas to work on, likeother jobs that I like, such as a police officer, a lawyer or an engineer.
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    • The ”TH” pronounce that was hard for me learn, my english teacher said that is like the ”F” sound in portuguese, and i was saying ”Fhat, Fhe, Fhrough”, that was weird, but now i know ho to say it (kinda) correctly.
      Сада гласајте !
    • The ”“TH” pronounce thatiation was hard for me learn, m. My eEnglish teacher said that ist is pronounced like the ”“F” sound in pPortuguese, and iI was saying ”“Fhat, Fhe, Fhrough”, t. That was weird, but now iI know how to say it (kinda) correctly.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Коментари
      Сада гласајте !
    • The ”TH” pronounce thatiation was hard for me learn, m. My eEnglish teacher said that is like the ”F” sound in pPortuguese, and i. I was saying ”Fhat, Fhe, Fhrough”, t. That was weird, but now iI know how to say it (kinda) of correctly.
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      Сада гласајте !
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