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  • New Sports Facility (Mother tongue corrections only, please)

  • This summer new sport facilities will be constructed at Central State University, thanks to a generous donation.
  • The woman doesn’ t agree with this decision.
  • She thinks that these money should be used to upgrade the library and the science building, or to build new ones.
  • In her opinion students really need that.
  • For example she have to have class in the basement of the science building because there are no other classes available in the building.
  • The man doens’ t agree with her.
  • He says that the money should be used to build new sport facilities because the university doesn’t have any of them, while it already has a library and a science building.
  • Moreover, it would take a lot of money, while new sport facilities would let the university to earn money from match tickets and so on.
  • The woman replies by saying that a new library and a new science building could encourage more students to appy for their university, so that it can earn more money from tuitions.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • This summer new sport facilities will be constructed at Central State University, thanks to a generous donation.
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    • She thinks that these money should be used to upgrade the library and the science building, or to build new ones.
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    • For example she have to have class in the basement of the science building because there are no other classes available in the building.
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    • He says that the money should be used to build new sport facilities because the university doesn’t have any of them, while it already has a library and a science building.
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    • Moreover, it would take a lot of money, while new sport facilities would let the university to earn money from match tickets and so on.
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    • The woman replies by saying that a new library and a new science building could encourage more students to appy for their university, so that it can earn more money from tuitions.
      Äänestä nyt!
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