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  • after my foundation degree, i integrated a generalist school engineer. it was important for me to enter in a generalist school to discover the differentes domain. another reason for why i wanted this school was the price of the schoolarity. the price was indeed really weak and i dont want make payed my parents.
  • in this school i specialise in mecanical after one year of discover because i like resolve technical problems.
  • my first intership was in environment where i learn the importance to respect the norm. i was in germany where the reglementation is strict but right. after that intership i decided to change of domain and made an intership in building on the industry side. where i discovered that i like the side because i am in contact with a lot of different person with different profil and skills.
  • And because i can see with my eyees the machines. taht was a great intership where i developped my skilfulness.
  • after taht experience, i wanted to stay in the terrain for my last intership but i wanted to discover the maintenance which match with my professional aspiration. in maintenance i need to learn every moment and adapt constantly my methode, it s really a challenge taht i like.
  • And now i want continu in this path with your firm which propose also a lot of export taht interest me because i appreciate to travel.

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    • after my foundation degree, i integrated a generalist school engineer. it was important for me to enter in a generalist school to discover the differentes domain. another reason for why i wanted this school was the price of the schoolarity. the price was indeed really weak and i dont want make payed my parents.
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    • my first intership was in environment where i learn the importance to respect the norm. i was in germany where the reglementation is strict but right. after that intership i decided to change of domain and made an intership in building on the industry side. where i discovered that i like the side because i am in contact with a lot of different person with different profil and skills.
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    • after taht experience, i wanted to stay in the terrain for my last intership but i wanted to discover the maintenance which match with my professional aspiration. in maintenance i need to learn every moment and adapt constantly my methode, it s really a challenge taht i like.
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