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- One month ago I met my boyfriend.
- He's amazing boy.
- I felt in love with him.
- But we have one big problem.
- We live in different cities of our big country. I love him.

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- One month ago I met my boyfriend.
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- One month ago I met a man who became my boyfriend.
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- ~~One month ago~~ I met my boyfriend one month ago .
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- He's amazing boy.
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- He's an amazing ~~boy~~person and I couldn't help but fall in love with him.
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- He's an amazing ~~boy~~person.
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- I felt in love with him.
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- I feltl in love with him.
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- ~~I felt in love with him.~~
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- I f~~elt~~all in love with him.
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- I feltl in love with him.
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- But we have one big problem.
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- But, we have one big problem.
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- We live in different cities of our big country. I love him.
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- We live in ~~different cities of our big country. I love him~~the same country, but in different cities. And it's a very big country at that. With that being said, the distance from each other makes things very difficult because I love him very much.
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