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    • First, I'd like to introduce myself.
    • My name is Ksenia. I'm 20.
    • I live in a small town called Ivanovo.I recently graduated from Ivanovo state University.
    • My specialty is sociology. during my training, I realized that I was not very interested in sociology.
  • I would like to become a foreign language teacher.
    • The teaching profession has always been considered one of the most honorable, but at the same time difficult.
  • Being a teacher means taking on a lot of responsibility.
    • I would like to become a teacher, because I would be interested in working with children, learning their psychology.
    • I really love children and can find an approach to almost everyone.
    • Teaching foreign languages attracts me because I have been interested in languages, especially English, since childhood.
    • I have always been interested in how foreigners think, what their worldview is, and so on.
    • I would like to share my experience with my students, share my knowledge with them, and give them wise advice.
    • My goals are also to master various teaching methods, professional growth, and the development of pedagogical abilities.
    • I hope that I will become a good teacher and pedagogy will become my credo.
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    • My specialty is sociology. during my training, I realized that I was not very interested in sociology.
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    • My specialty is sociology. dDuring my training,studies I realized that I was not very interested in sociology.
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    • MyWhile my area of specialtyization is sociology., I realized during my training, I realized that I wasam not very interested in the topic of sociology.
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    • My specialty is sociology. dDuring my training,the course I realized that I was not very interested in sociology.
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    • The teaching profession has always been considered one of the most honorable, but at the same time difficult.
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    • The teaching profession has always been considered one of the most honorable, but at the same time quite difficult.
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    • I would like to become a teacher, because I would be interested in working with children, learning their psychology.
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    • I would like to become a teacher, because I would be interested in working with children, learn and studying their psychology.
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    • I would like to become a teacher, because I would beam interested in working with children, and learning about their psychologyical makeup.
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    • I would like to become a teacher, because I would be interested in working with children, and learning theirchildhood psychology.
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    • Teaching foreign languages attracts me because I have been interested in languages, especially English, since childhood.
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    • Teaching foreign languages attractsppeals to me because I have been interested in languages, especially English, since I was a childhood
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    • Teaching foreign languages attracts me becauseSince I was a child I have been interested in teaching foreign languages, especially English, since childhood.
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    • I have always been interested in how foreigners think, what their worldview is, and so on.
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    • I have always been interested in how foreigners think, whatto understand their world view is, and so on, etc.
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    • I have always been interested in how foreigners think, whattheir perception of their worldview is, and so on.
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    • I would like to share my experience with my students, share my knowledge with them, and give them wise advice.
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    • I would like to share my experience with my students, share my knowledge with them, and give them wisknowledgable advice.
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    • I would like to share my experience with my students, share my knowledge with them, and giveand knowledge with my students and offer them wise advicecounsel.
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    • My goals are also to master various teaching methods, professional growth, and the development of pedagogical abilities.
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    • My goals are also to master variousinclude mastering multiple teaching methods, professional growth, and the development of pedagogical abilities.
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    • My goals are also to master various teaching methods, to develop professional growth,ly and the development of pedagogical abilities.
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