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Task 2 part 2 (sorry my text is too long)
- Here we come to the point where I disagree with the statement.
- And again I can include the example with the old doctor living in the streets.
- Though we all know that he has no money nor any other properties most of us respect him for his decision.
- It doesn't mean that there are some people who say he still deserved his destiny because he gave up.
- But I can also understand the statement because in our society the richest people have the most influence in mostly all aspects of life.
- Some examples are the newest fashion, politics and when it comes to America again we can also include the fact that you need a lot of money for your children's education.
- Hereby we have to make a clear seperation though.
- In my country, Germany, it is easier to "climb the ladder of success" than I think it is in America.
- You get your funds for education from the state and you don't have to pay any per cents when you pay back.
- You can join a party and become a politician if you want to- for sure other aspects also play a big role- but you don't have to spend a lot of money on the campaign.
- Also in 15 of 16 German counties you don't have to pay for universities.
- There are actual office-work payments you have to consider but you pay like 300€ a semester for those.
- In comparison to America it is nothing as you can pay up to 50 000 $ depending on your university funds.
- I have seen many differences during my time in the USA.
- Like people who really seem to be of good honour, kind and even clever.
- But whose social background just doesn't allow them to get a good education and a good job afterwards.
- And they are maybe too average to receive a scholarship.
- And if they request money from the bank they pay it back until they are at least 30 years old.
- Anastasya93July 2013Voĉdoni nun!
PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English