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  • My favourite hobby

  • My favourite hobby is the gym.
    • I took it up when I was at high school, I and a friend of mine decided to go to the gym togheter, he gave up after 1 month but I kept on going to the gym.
    • I like working out when I’ m not studying and even when I am on holyday.
    • I usually go to the gym twice or three times a week for about one hour and a half.
    • I first started by following routines which personal trainers wrote for me, then I searched the web to find out more information about training and now I follow a routine which I wrote by myself.
    • I also follow a diet, it’ s mandatory if you want to get some results.
    • It takes me a lot of time, I have to do the shopping and I have to cook even three times a day.
  • I can’ t eat out so often, even though sometimes I really want to.
  • It’s very difficult to deal with studying and following a diet at the same time, but I really like what I do.
    • When I come back to my native town I can’ t go to the gym, so I work out at home.
  • I have some weights and bars for training with.
  • My mother doesn’t like it, because when I work out my room is always a mess, and she has to cook for me whatever I wish.
  • On the other hand, my father is very happy because he likes working out too, sometimes we work out togheter o we go running in the park.
  • In the end, I think that working out and having a healthy life is very important.
  • Many doctors recommend to take up some sports and to have a correct diet.

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    • I took it up when I was at high school, I and a friend of mine decided to go to the gym togheter, he gave up after 1 month but I kept on going to the gym.
      14% GOOD (7 votes)
    • I took it up when I was at high school, I and a friend of mine and I decided to go to the gym toghether, he gave up after 1 month but I kept on going to the gym.
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    • I took it up when I was at high school, I and a friend of mineone of my friend decided to go to the gym toghether, he gave up after 1 month but I kept on going to the gym.
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    • I first started by following routines which personal trainers wrote for me, then I searched the web to find out more information about training and now I follow a routine which I wrote by myself.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I first started by following routines which personal trainers wrote for me, then I searched in the web to find out more information about training and nowthen I follow a routine which I wrote byfor myself.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It takes me a lot of time, I have to do the shopping and I have to cook even three times a day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It takes me a lot of time, I have to dgo theo shopping and I have to cook evening three times a dayin one day even.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It takes me a lot of time, I have to dgo theo shopping and I have to cook evening three times a dayin one day even.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It’s very difficult to deal with studying and following a diet at the same time, but I really like what I do.
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    • My mother doesn’t like it, because when I work out my room is always a mess, and she has to cook for me whatever I wish.
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    • On the other hand, my father is very happy because he likes working out too, sometimes we work out togheter o we go running in the park.
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