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    • My homework Constructor of the Worlds: Paul Scheerbart Images of Women and Men is devoted to the work of the German writer Paul Karl Wilhelm Scheerbart (1863-1915) and focuses on the relations between the sexes shown in his selected works.
    • The works of this author have never enjoyed great popularity, although they were published in such popular magazines as, for example, “Der Sturm”, “Die Insel”, “Die Jugend”, “Die Fackel”, “Freie Bühne”, “Pan”, “Ver Sacrum” or “Aktion” and reputables publishing house, including Insel, Rowohlt, J C C Bruns, Schuster & Loeffler, Oesterheld and Georg Müller.
    • The number of books written by the author can be astonishing, because there are thirty of them.
    • Many books and articles have been devoted to Paul Scheerbart’s work, but the authors focus primarily on fantasy and on the Orient.
    • Among them there are no items referring to the way Scheerbart presents female, male and extraterrestrial figures, while this topic is extremely important for understanding the specific work of the German author.
    • Issues regarding the relationship between the sexes, a specific anti-eroticism and alternatives to marriage are a manifestation of the author’s worldview.
    • In addition to autobiographical aspects, his works also reveal a historical context and a literary way of presenting women and men at the turn of the century.
    • These extremely important elements are the subject of this work, which aims to highlight and clarify the issues overlooked by researchers of Scheerbart’s work.
    • In the first chapter, devoted to theoretical considerations, there appear the concepts, fantasy and, Orient – the two pillars on which Scheerbart’s work is based – as well as the issue of femininity and masculinity.
    • They were discussed in the context of the late nineteenth and early twentieth century literature, against which Scheerbart’s work can be seen as progressive, even due to the fact that emancipated female figures appear in his works, showing great courage in demanding equal treatment.
  • In addition to the explanation of historical and literary contexts in the second chapter, it was necessary to thoroughly analyse the poetics of the German writer, in particular the characteristic style of his works, expressed in the lightness with which this literary constructor created new worlds.
  • In his books, there is no room for sophisticated word games or complicated sentences, but they are characterized by special imagery and poetry, thanks to which Scheerbart is perceived as a precursor of expressionism and surrealism.
  • Characteristic features of his work are at the same time a chatty tone and apparent negligence in the choice of words, so the author probably wanted to show that he freely uses the language and does not care about criticism.
  • Analysis of the content of the works showed that Scheerbart’s literary interests were in science fiction, Orient, and pursuit of higher goals, and – as an eulogist of anti-eroticism – he made Orient, which in other works of this period was usually steeped in eroticism –, an almost anti-erotic place.
  • The fictional figures of men and women live in his works with restraint, and when they happen to follow passion, this pursuit leads to gruesome, violent situations, which, however, do not necessarily frighten the recipient – their grotesqueness makes them rather funny, which is another surprising element in works of Scheerbart.
  • In such scenes – usually overloaded with emotions – is shown the whole palette of various human vices, which are primarily the participation of male characters and definitely less often female ones.
  • The special aura of the Orient also helps men to break free from relationships that are destructive, and leads them to unite with the Hegelian spirit of the world, which for many of them is their most important goal of life.
  • The atrocities described in detail take place above all in the Middle East, but they can also occur in the Old Continent, especially since Scheerbart’s oriental novels are often an allusion to the situation prevailing in Europe at the time, while the writer was a declared opponent of capitalism, militarism and war.
  • Some of Scheerbart’s novels are located in space or imaginary planets, and are seen – even more clearly than his oriental works – as a critique of humanity and Europe of the early 20th century.
  • The boundless universe appears as an alternative to everything that the German author objected to, and so, next to eroticism, it was above all capitalism and militarism, as well as many other unacceptable views that he ridiculed in his texts.
  • Humor and fantasy were two essential elements in both his daily life and his work become more bearable.
  • The second chapter also discusses the fanciful way of classifying one’s own works as, for example, “harem novel,” “soul novel”, or “cultural novel” which goes beyond all literary standards.

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    • My homework Constructor of the Worlds: Paul Scheerbart Images of Women and Men is devoted to the work of the German writer Paul Karl Wilhelm Scheerbart (1863-1915) and focuses on the relations between the sexes shown in his selected works.
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    • My homework , "Constructor of the Worlds: Paul Scheerbart Images of Women and Men is devoted", pertains to the work of the German writer Paul Karl Wilhelm Scheerbart (1863-1915) and focuses on the relationships between the sexes shown in his selectedin a selection of his works.
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    • The works of this author have never enjoyed great popularity, although they were published in such popular magazines as, for example, “Der Sturm”, “Die Insel”, “Die Jugend”, “Die Fackel”, “Freie Bühne”, “Pan”, “Ver Sacrum” or “Aktion” and reputables publishing house, including Insel, Rowohlt, J C C Bruns, Schuster & Loeffler, Oesterheld and Georg Müller.
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    • The works of this author have never enjoyed great popularity, although they wereWhile this author's work has not enjoyed great popularity, many of his stories have been published in such popular magazines as, for example, “ Der Sturm, Die Insel, Die Jugend, Die Fackel, Freie Bühne, Pan, Ver Sacrum” or “Aktion” and reputables publishing house, including and Aktion. They have also been published by such book publishers as Insel, Rowohlt, J C C Bruns, Schuster & Loeffler, Oesterheld and Georg Müller.
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    • Many books and articles have been devoted to Paul Scheerbart’s work, but the authors focus primarily on fantasy and on the Orient.
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    • MWhile many books and articles have been devotpertained to Paul Scheerbart’s work, but the authorstheir focus has primarily obeen fantasy and onthe author's views of the Orient.
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    • Among them there are no items referring to the way Scheerbart presents female, male and extraterrestrial figures, while this topic is extremely important for understanding the specific work of the German author.
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    • Among them there are no items referring to the wayFew to none among these works is work focused on Scheerbart 's representsations of female, male and extraterrestrial figures, while thisa topic that is extremely important for a full understanding the specific work of theis German author's work.
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    • Issues regarding the relationship between the sexes, a specific anti-eroticism and alternatives to marriage are a manifestation of the author’s worldview.
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    • Issues regardingSuch issues as the relationship between the sexes, a specific anti-eroticism and alternatives to marriage are a manifestation of lifestyles are a central theme in the author's view of the worldview.
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    • In addition to autobiographical aspects, his works also reveal a historical context and a literary way of presenting women and men at the turn of the century.
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    • In addition to their obviously autobiographical aspects, his works also reveal a historical context and a literary way of presenting women and men at the turn of the century.
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    • These extremely important elements are the subject of this work, which aims to highlight and clarify the issues overlooked by researchers of Scheerbart’s work.
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    • These extremely important elements are the subject of this work, which aims to highlights and clarify the issues overlooked by researchers of Scheerbart’s workies many issues in his work that are often overlooked by other scholars.
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    • In the first chapter, devoted to theoretical considerations, there appear the concepts, fantasy and, Orient – the two pillars on which Scheerbart’s work is based – as well as the issue of femininity and masculinity.
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    • In tThe first chapter, is devoted to theoretical considerations, there appear in the concepts, f of Fantasy and, The Orient – the two pillars on which Scheerbart’s work is based – as well as the issues of femininity and masculinity.
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    • They were discussed in the context of the late nineteenth and early twentieth century literature, against which Scheerbart’s work can be seen as progressive, even due to the fact that emancipated female figures appear in his works, showing great courage in demanding equal treatment.
      Stem nou!
    • They wese concepts and issues are discussed in the context of the late nineteenth- and early twentieth -century literature, againstin which Scheerbart’s work can be seen aseems progressive, even due to the fact that emancipated female figures appear in his works, showing.g., his characterizations of emancipated female figures who demonstrate great courage in their demandings for equal treatment.
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  • Sentence 11
    • In addition to the explanation of historical and literary contexts in the second chapter, it was necessary to thoroughly analyse the poetics of the German writer, in particular the characteristic style of his works, expressed in the lightness with which this literary constructor created new worlds.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
    • In his books, there is no room for sophisticated word games or complicated sentences, but they are characterized by special imagery and poetry, thanks to which Scheerbart is perceived as a precursor of expressionism and surrealism.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 12VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 12
  • Sentence 13
    • Characteristic features of his work are at the same time a chatty tone and apparent negligence in the choice of words, so the author probably wanted to show that he freely uses the language and does not care about criticism.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 13VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 13
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    • Analysis of the content of the works showed that Scheerbart’s literary interests were in science fiction, Orient, and pursuit of higher goals, and – as an eulogist of anti-eroticism – he made Orient, which in other works of this period was usually steeped in eroticism –, an almost anti-erotic place.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 14VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 14
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    • The fictional figures of men and women live in his works with restraint, and when they happen to follow passion, this pursuit leads to gruesome, violent situations, which, however, do not necessarily frighten the recipient – their grotesqueness makes them rather funny, which is another surprising element in works of Scheerbart.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 15VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 15
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    • In such scenes – usually overloaded with emotions – is shown the whole palette of various human vices, which are primarily the participation of male characters and definitely less often female ones.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 16VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 16
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    • The special aura of the Orient also helps men to break free from relationships that are destructive, and leads them to unite with the Hegelian spirit of the world, which for many of them is their most important goal of life.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 17VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 17
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    • The atrocities described in detail take place above all in the Middle East, but they can also occur in the Old Continent, especially since Scheerbart’s oriental novels are often an allusion to the situation prevailing in Europe at the time, while the writer was a declared opponent of capitalism, militarism and war.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 18VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 18
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    • Some of Scheerbart’s novels are located in space or imaginary planets, and are seen – even more clearly than his oriental works – as a critique of humanity and Europe of the early 20th century.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 19VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 19
  • Sentence 20
    • The boundless universe appears as an alternative to everything that the German author objected to, and so, next to eroticism, it was above all capitalism and militarism, as well as many other unacceptable views that he ridiculed in his texts.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 20VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 20
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    • The second chapter also discusses the fanciful way of classifying one’s own works as, for example, “harem novel,” “soul novel”, or “cultural novel” which goes beyond all literary standards.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 22VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 22