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    • The eastern medicine is a famous type of treatment used by many people has been passing down from generations.
    • The medicine is not empirically proven by scientific method and has a variety of forms which includes the use of herbs, plants, elements and oil.
    • It is vital to use this treatment in a modern life for the health benefit.
    • The statement that traditional medicine is useless and has an extremely bad influence on patient's health completely inaccurate because it's quite inexpensive and effective for most ailments.
    • An alternative medicine is affordable for general public and can be easily accessed.
    • Most forms of traditional remedies can be bought for just few dollars, or even grown in a village's garden whereas pharmaceutical pills can cost almost the half average salary of citizen to treat for the same disease.
    • For instance, prescription antibiotics bought at the pharmacy can cost about one hundred dollars for just several times, however, traditional remedies such as garlic, parsley and aloe vera cost below one dollar.
    • Moreover, individuals can easily buy these products on the grocery stores without prescription to exchange it.
    • They're not only cheaper but also truelly effective for health conditions.
    • Most importantly, traditional medicine often targets the cause of medical problems and has effective long-lasting results whereas western medicine examines symptoms.
    • Practicing yoga not only helps gain strength and stamina but also provides healthier organs and skin by transporting nutrients and oxygen throughout the body.
    • One research has shown that blood measurements and waist circumference - a marker for heart disease - improved in middle-aged adults with metabolic syndrome who practiced yoga for three months.
    • In conclusion, the notion that alternative medicine are invaluable is wrong as it is often less expensive and more effective.
    • In the end, the ancestors would not have been used traditional methods of healing if it had bad results

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    • The eastern medicine is a famous type of treatment used by many people has been passing down from generations.
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    • The eEastern medicine is a famous type of treatment used by many people. It has been passinged down from generations to generation.
    • The eEastern medicine is a famous type of treatment used by many peopleand has been passinged down from generations. to generation.
    • The eEastern medicine is a famous type of treatmentpopular method of medical treatment that's been used by many people has been passing down fromfor many generations.
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    • The medicine is not empirically proven by scientific method and has a variety of forms which includes the use of herbs, plants, elements and oil.
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    • The medicine is not empirically proven by scientific method, and has a variety of forms which includes the use of herbs, plants, elements and oil.
    • The medicine is not empirically proven by scientific method and has a variety of forms which includes the use of herbs, plants, elements and oil.It has a variety of forms which includes the use of herbs,elements, and oil. However, none of this has been empirically proven by Western science.
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    • The statement that traditional medicine is useless and has an extremely bad influence on patient's health completely inaccurate because it's quite inexpensive and effective for most ailments.
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    • The statement that traditional medicine is useless and ¶
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    • The statementclaim that traditional medicine is useless and ¶
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      a pseudo science is completely inaccurate because it's quite inexpensive and effective for most ailments.
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    • Most forms of traditional remedies can be bought for just few dollars, or even grown in a village's garden whereas pharmaceutical pills can cost almost the half average salary of citizen to treat for the same disease.
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    • Most forms of traditional remedies can be bought for just a few dollars, or even grown in a village's garden whereas pharmaceutical pills can cost almost the half of the average salary of a citizen to treat for the same disease.
    • Most forms of traditional remedies can be bought for just a few dollars, or even grown in a village'sprivate garden whereas pharmaceutical pills can cost almost the half average salary of citizen to treat for the same disease.
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    • For instance, prescription antibiotics bought at the pharmacy can cost about one hundred dollars for just several times, however, traditional remedies such as garlic, parsley and aloe vera cost below one dollar.
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    • For instance, prescription antibiotics bought at the pharmacy just a few times can cost about one hundred dollars for just several times, however, traditional remedies such as garlic, ¶
      parsley and aloe vera cost below one dollar.
    • For instance, prescription antibiotics bought at the pharmacy can cost about one hundred dollars for just several times, hpills. However, traditional remedies such as garlic, ¶
      parsley and aloe vera cost
      belowless than one dollar.
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    • Moreover, individuals can easily buy these products on the grocery stores without prescription to exchange it.
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    • Moreover, individuals can easily buy these products on thein grocery stores without a prescription to exchange it.
    • MoreoverIn addition, individuals can easily buy these products onat the grocery stores without a prescription to exchange it.
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    • Most importantly, traditional medicine often targets the cause of medical problems and has effective long-lasting results whereas western medicine examines symptoms.
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    • Most importantly, traditional medicine often targets the cause of medical problems and has effective long-lasting results, whereas western medicine examines symptommay have side effects.
    • Most importantly, traditional medicine often targets the cause of medical problems and has effective long-lasting results, whereas western medicine examineonly treats symptoms.
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    • Practicing yoga not only helps gain strength and stamina but also provides healthier organs and skin by transporting nutrients and oxygen throughout the body.
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    • Practicing yoga not only helps gain strength and improve stamina, but also provides healthierbenefits organs and skin by transporting nutrients and oxygen throughout the body.
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    • One research has shown that blood measurements and waist circumference - a marker for heart disease - improved in middle-aged adults with metabolic syndrome who practiced yoga for three months.
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    • One research study has shown that blood measurements and waist circumference - a marker for heart disease - improved in middle-aged adults with metabolic syndrome who had practiced yoga for three months.
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    • In conclusion, the notion that alternative medicine are invaluable is wrong as it is often less expensive and more effective.
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    • In conclusion, the notion that alternative medicine areis invaluable is wrong as it is often less expensive and more effective.
    • In conclusion, the notion that alternative medicine are invaluablis fake is wrong as it is often less expensive and more effective.
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    • In the end, the ancestors would not have been used traditional methods of healing if it had bad results
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    • In the end, the ancestors would not have been used traditional methods of healing if it had bad results.
    • In the end, the ancestorsAfter all, people in the past would not have been used traditional methods of healing if it had bad results.
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