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Hello, i just want to tell you why i really want to learn english.

First, if i want to be honest, its for my future work.

When i'll finish my studies, i'm gonna work in business matters and english is really necessary for that!

Also, its because i think that being able to speak english properly allow you to exchange with so many people aroud the world, because english is the first language speaking, and its a fantastic way to connect people, share ideas, building knew things !