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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

Rédigé par Mxmachine - English

    • My childhood story

    • A moment ago, I tryna ride bicycle with my mom at the street around the apartment .
    • She teach me to ride bicycle in the right way I suddenly fall because ain't that good whencar it wasn't stop me then again she always support me so that I keep it up.
    • In another day I went to my neighbour house to give them some food and biscuit only by feet.
    • When I want to visit them I lost my sandals so my sister land me her sandals and her sandals is bigger than mine that's all I can do I take it and use it even though it's not suit me.
    • After visited my neighbour house we were enjoy at home while saw the fish moves around on the water, I gave food to fish.
    • I loved to bought fish in the front at school and then I bring it at home and put it down to the aquarium.
    • I loved fish colours some have blue colour, red colour, orange colour, black colour, white colour and some fish has mix the colours.
    • These fish so beautiful and really small.
    • I really loved fish since I child until adult.

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