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Text from Mxmachine - English

    • My childhood story

    • A moment ago, I tryna ride bicycle with my mom at the street around the apartment .
    • She teach me to ride bicycle in the right way I suddenly fall because ain't that good whencar it wasn't stop me then again she always support me so that I keep it up.
    • In another day I went to my neighbour house to give them some food and biscuit only by feet.
    • When I want to visit them I lost my sandals so my sister land me her sandals and her sandals is bigger than mine that's all I can do I take it and use it even though it's not suit me.
    • After visited my neighbour house we were enjoy at home while saw the fish moves around on the water, I gave food to fish.
    • I loved to bought fish in the front at school and then I bring it at home and put it down to the aquarium.
    • I loved fish colours some have blue colour, red colour, orange colour, black colour, white colour and some fish has mix the colours.
    • These fish so beautiful and really small.
    • I really loved fish since I child until adult.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • She teach me to ride bicycle in the right way I suddenly fall because ain't that good whencar it wasn't stop me then again she always support me so that I keep it up.
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    • She teach me to ride bicycle in the right way I suddenly fall because ain't that good whencar it wasn't stop me then again she always support me so that I keep it up.

      NOTE: The intention/message in this "statement" is utterly confused and convoluted, too much for me to decipher, so I'll not dare to "edit" it -- you need to rethink and resubmit this statement if anyone (qualified - for I've no doubt UNQUALIFIED persons will attempt to "correct" this statement) is to be able to correct your work.
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    • When I want to visit them I lost my sandals so my sister land me her sandals and her sandals is bigger than mine that's all I can do I take it and use it even though it's not suit me.
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    • When I want to visit them I lostBefore going I could not find my sandals, so my sister land me her sandals and her sandals is bigger than mine that's all I can do I take it and use it even though it'sI had to wear my sister's sandals, even though they were larger than mine and did not sufit me properly.
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    • After visited my neighbour house we were enjoy at home while saw the fish moves around on the water, I gave food to fish.
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    • After visited myreturning home from the neighbours house we were enjoy at home while saw the fish movesI fed my fish and watched them swimming arbound ot in the water, I gave food to fishir tank.
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    • I loved to bought fish in the front at school and then I bring it at home and put it down to the aquarium.
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    • I loved to bought fish in the front at school and then I bring it at home and put it down to the aquarium.

      NOTE: Again not exactly certain of your meaning/intention @ this statement so I have left it UNCORRECTED. But know that it is also a confused mess and needs to be corrected, again, not by an UNQUALIFIED (so-called) "expert" in English but by a native English speaker who truly understands vocabulary, syntax, and grammar.
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    • I loved fish colours some have blue colour, red colour, orange colour, black colour, white colour and some fish has mix the colours.
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    • I loved fishthe variety of colours some have blue colour, red colour, orange colour, black colour, white colour and some fish has mix thof the different fish: blue, red, orange, black, white, and some a mixture of multiple colours.
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