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Văn bản từ jorgelcneto - English

    • Languages curiosities

    • Since I was a kid, I have been interested in languages and discover new cultures abroad.
    • However, I never had enough money to travel to another country or even pay a good English school to practice my English.
    • Fortunately, when I started a job as a teacher I could afford an English school and starting practice this lovely language.
    • I'm 35 now and I just could go abroad and plan a long trip when I was almost 30.
    • Later, I got the opportunity to spend a time in Holland and from there I could travel a lot, totalizing approximately 20 different countries, with the most in Europe.
    • I have made many friends from different countries due to those trips and it is incredible because when we are sharing experiences about cultures around the world we can increase our own knowledge and became a huge better human being.
    • So, I hope to spend more and more time with travels because when I am travelling I can really find myself in a good way and that is the life reason, actually.

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  • câu 1
    • Since I was a kid, I have been interested in languages and discover new cultures abroad.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Since I was a kid, I have been interested in languages and the discovery of new cultures abroad.

      OR¶

      Since I was a kid, I have been interested in languages and discovering new cultures abroad.¶

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  • câu 2
    • However, I never had enough money to travel to another country or even pay a good English school to practice my English.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, I never had enough money to travel to another country or even pay a good English school to practicfor high-quality English lessons to improve my English.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Fortunately, when I started a job as a teacher I could afford an English school and starting practice this lovely language.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fortunately, when I started a job as a teacher I could afford an English schoollessons and starting practiceed learning this lovely language.

      NOTE: I never thought I would read or hear, in my life, English language described as "lovely", lol. If you say so!
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  • câu 4
    • I'm 35 now and I just could go abroad and plan a long trip when I was almost 30.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'm 35 now and I just could go abroad and plan a long trip when I was almost 30.

      NOTE: I want to help you with the statement -- it is in dire need of help -- but the sense/meaning is somewhat obscure, confounding even. So, I will leave it as is, but KNOW that it needs correction(s).
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  • câu 5
    • Later, I got the opportunity to spend a time in Holland and from there I could travel a lot, totalizing approximately 20 different countries, with the most in Europe.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Later, I got the opportunity to spend asignificant time in Holland and; from there I couldHolland I travelled a lot, totalizing approximately 20 different countries, with the most in Europe.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I have made many friends from different countries due to those trips and it is incredible because when we are sharing experiences about cultures around the world we can increase our own knowledge and became a huge better human being.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I haveBecause of these trips I made many friends fromin different countries due to those trips and it is incredible because when we are sharing experiences about cultures around the world w, and realized that by sharing experiences with different cultures one can increase our ownhis personal knowledge and becaome a huge better human beingperson.
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  • câu 7
    • So, I hope to spend more and more time with travels because when I am travelling I can really find myself in a good way and that is the life reason, actually.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So, I hope to spend more and more time withtime travelsling because when I amit is through my travellings that I can really find myself in a good way and that is the life reason, actually. which is, after all, one of the main goals in one's life.
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