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- Introducing Myself
Hello.
- My name is Lydia. I'm 37.
- And I'm from Ukraine.
I'm married and have a wonderful daughter.
- Now I'm in maternity leave.
Before that I was working as an economist.
- I have a lot of hobbies.
- Such as reading, sewing and cooking. And much more.
- But I don't have enough time for all of them.
- Also I adore to learn english.
- But I'm not good in it.
- However, I try to do my best!

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- Hello.
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- My name is Lydia. I'm 37.
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- My name is Lydia. I'm 37 years old.
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- And I'm from Ukraine.
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- I'm married and have a wonderful daughter.
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- Now I'm in maternity leave.
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- Now I'm ion maternity leave.
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- Before that I was working as an economist.
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- I have a lot of hobbies.
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- Such as reading, sewing and cooking. And much more.
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- SI have a lot of hobbies, such as reading, sewing and cooking. ~~And much more.~~
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- But I don't have enough time for all of them.
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- But, I don't have ~~enough~~ time for all of them.
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- Also I adore to learn english.
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- Also, I adore to learn eing English.
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- AI also I adore to learn eing English, but I'm not good at it.
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- But I'm not good in it.
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- But, I'm not good inat it.
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- However, I try to do my best!
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- However, I ~~try to do my best~~am doing my best to learn!
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